The misogyny made it hard for me to finish this

I really liked the setting and the story premise. That is why I kept up with it so long. The narration was pretty good, definitely not terrible or annoying but not stunning either.

I found the main characters somewhat flat and often obnoxious.

I got really burnt out on the male POV characters sexualizing every female that crossed their paths, including ones of inappropriate age or relationship, or in otherwise very non-sexual situations. I got tired of the one female POV character's obstacles always being "how do I get out of this without getting raped?" I got annoyed with powerful female characters suddenly becoming incapable when a male character needed to either save them or show he was better than them. I got tired of every random minion threatening to rape the loved ones of the male POV characters.

I should not have finished this book, but I did, and I moved onto the next one, which I quit when a scene started with a male POV character saving a female character that is supposedly one of the most powerful sorcerers in the WORLD from being raped by 5 regular guys.

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I LOVED THIS TRILOGY!!!

These books were really up my alley. They were fast paced with a variety of characters that were decent, not so decent and questionable. There was intrigue, betrayal, backstabbing, glory, and loss. Hell, even the battle scenes were good. It was full of action and kept me highly entertained, so much so that I read one book after the other. Usually when I come across such a find I like to savor it, but with these books the desire to know what happened next won out.

The narrator was good for the most part, except some of the younger characters sounded like they were in their sixties. There were some minor issues, but they didn't take away from the story as a whole.

This author is impressive and has an extraordinary imagination. This is a really enjoyable worthwhile series that I highly recommend. I can't wait to read more from him!!!

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Flintlock fantasy with a solid story arc.

Promise of Blood is "Flintlock Fantasy" and introduces the concept of Powder Mages who are gun using sorcerers that rely on gunpowder to fuel their abilities. Powder Mages can enter a powder trance by ingesting gun powder and then manipulate bullets as they fly or explode any gun powder being carried by enemies. It is a unique magic system and executed pretty well by Brian McClellan. That concept combined with an interesting story arc carry the book and make up for the characters which I found to be a little uninteresting as a whole.

The book starts at the end of a coup led by Field Marshall Tamas, who with his cabal of Powder Mages, has just ousted the King and killed off his cabal of Privileged Sorcerers. A mystery unfolds when each member of the royal cabal utters the same words as they die: "You can't break Kresimir's promise." Tamas calls on Inspector Adamat to help sort out what those words mean and this leads to a story that unfolds over 3 books involving multiple nations, armies, and even gods.

The three main characters are Field Marshall Tamas, Inspector Adamat, and the Field Marshall's son, Taniel Two-Shot. Taniel earned his nickname because as a Powder Mage he is able to shoot two bullets at once to kill two different people. In what is perhaps the most interesting story line in book 1, Taniel is sent off by Tamas to kill the one remaining member of the Royal Cabal who survived the coup. That person is Privileged Borbador, who was raised by Tamas and happens to be Taniel's best friend.

Christian Rodska does a decent job at the narration and seems to be a good fit for the content.

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A Promise of Awesome!

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A review of A Promise of Blood by Brian McClellan
I enjoyed Brian McClellan's A Promise of Blood. It was a fun read from start to finish. It also perfectly meets the need I've been feeling for a while now. I love epic fantasy, but I feel the swords and sorcery trope is a bit tired. Don't get me wrong, there's still plenty of room for awesome in medieval-based fantasy, but we've been stuck in the dark ages for quite some time. I want to see how wizards deal with the industrial revolution, which is exactly what McClellan does in this book.

What's great about A Promise of Blood, is that most of the bread and butter fantasy tropes are still there, they just have to deal with the upstart middle-class powder mages who have decided that the oligarchic sorcerers have had their turn. In fact if you took, say, the Wheel of Time, and revisited fifty or a hundred years after the events in A Memory of Light, you'd basically have A Promise of Blood. It basically has the same back story - way back when the sorcerers did stuff that makes today's elite look like children; the sorcerers can manipulate the classical elements; the sorcerers and kings have all the power and most of the wealth. There's even the threat of gods returning to wreak havoc on mere mortals' best laid plans.

But the times, they are a changing, thanks to Field Marshal Tamas and his cabal of powder mages, who ingest gunpowder and can manipulate bullets, whether that be bouncing them around corners or sniping someone from several miles away. And McClellan definitely delivers on his promise. Overthrowing the King and all the nobility can be a messy affair, and you can bet that the neighboring monarchs aren't thrilled that Tamas killed god's chosen king. Their own subjects might get ideas, after all.

I thought McClellan did a good job choosing his viewpoint characters. The story is told through the eyes of the General and interim dictator, his son, the common soldier, a middle-class investigator, and a laundress of one of the erstwhile noble families. I'm not giving names because I listened to the Audiobook and don't know how to spell anyone's name. I felt that giving us these different viewpoints lets us really feel the impact of all these social changes. Plus, the legion of secondary characters are also well-rounded and add to the depth.

As a note on the Audiobook, Christian Rodska does an excellent job narrating. He really gets into almost acting out the dialog instead of merely reading it.

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Needs Some Polishing, But Has Great Potential

Honestly, it was really hard for me to get into this book. I wouldn't have finished it if the reviewers here hadn't have said it gets good about 2/3 into the story. They were right! The last third is quite exciting and worth the read. There's a fun story here. There's just a few issues that prevented me from fully enjoying it.

My first complaint is the writing style. It lacks polish. The pacing is all over the place. The chapters felt disjointed. Some parts were so rushed I was confused as to what happened. Other parts were so slow I was bored to tears.

The magic system is creative, but never explained very well. I often struggled to understand what was going on. I felt the collection of the three kinds of magic (Powder Mages, Knacked, Privileged) was very random. With so much variety, it felt like pretty much any kind of magic can happen in this world.

Adding to the confusion, there's a lot of side characters to keep track of. I honestly didn't know who was who until the end of the book.

The character development isn't particularly strong. The characters lack depth and I struggled to connect with them. Adamat is pretty boring. Taniel is a generic hero with a touch of daddy issues. Tamas is so grouchy that I didn't like him at first. As I got to know him better though, he really grew on me. He is perhaps the most complex character in the book. Ka-Poel really intrigued me and I hope to see more of her.

Okay, complaints aside, everything starts to come together in the final third of the book. This is when I felt like I was finally understanding all the different characters and events and how they were adding to the larger story. The pacing smooths out for an enjoyable ride building up to an exciting climax (albeit with an slightly abrupt ending). I enjoyed the last third so much it nearly made up for the slog of the first two thirds.

I guess overall I thought this book was flawed, but with great potential. I hear the next book improves a lot on this one, so I am excited to continue.

Christian Rodska did a poor job as narrator. He made several of the characters sound like grouchy old men. This made it hard to like the characters and distinguish them from one another. I nearly returned the book because this was so obnoxious. Also, his heavy accent made it hard to understand some words.

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Wonderful Fantasy set in Napoleonic-Era style tecn

I'm sick and tired of nobles, kings, emperors, dukes, lords, and knights. It looks like Brian McClellan feels the same way.

The narration was fantastic. Christian Rodska usually does great and this is no exception.

Main components are as follows:

* Oliver Cromwell style protagonist. "The age of kings is dead" indeed.
* Magic Musketeers, or "Powder Mages." They're super interesting and fun.
* Old Magic/Feudalism vs. New Magic/New Technology
* Frontiersman + Native Tribeswoman ala French/Indian war style groups.
* Old Gods and Ancient wizard creatures.

The Characters feel real and realized, the plot is interesting and fun, and the ending is satisfying and a good setup for the next book in the series.

Give it a try! :)

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Laissez les bons temps rouler!

Here in New Orleans, one of the most passionate pursuits of its citizens is cuisine, and that's no surprise. In this wonderful city of diverse cultures and rich history, that's a given. Some of the very best dining in the world is served up right here, day in and day out. From the very first glass of wine, to the final napkin to the lips, the meal's presentation and it combination of flavors and aromas ARE the event, and set the evening's pace for conversation, enjoyment and celebration. And all of this begins with the preparation of the ingredients. Whether it's a fried shrimp po-boy with a col-drink down in da "Ninet Ward", to a five-star evening of fine dining at Commander's Palace, it's all the same: Preparation and presentation.

You know where I'm headed with this, don't you?

A great story, like any good meal, takes detailed preparation and solid presentation for a memorable experience. The table must be set, and the greater the destination, the bigger the table, the better prepared. Otherwise, the evening is ruined.

And in "Promise of Blood,", McClellan has all the makings of a experienced chef. Think alternate colonial historical fantasy - Sort of a musket, pike and magical story that might have been. One that can be a bit overwhelming at first. You'll need to listen very closely to this audiobook, because you're thrust into the story immediately - A royal coup by the military, right in the first few minutes. Done. Over. And the military is mopping up. So you don't have a lot of time to acclimate.

And it's a well-thought, rich world, full of deeply defined characters, diverse story lines worth your pursuit, a magic system both smart and sensical, and a helping of political/historical machiavellian mayhem that sweetens the meal. The dialogue is believable and doesn't meander. McClellan also does a fabulous job of suspending disbelief, which is so essential for an author to accomplish within the journey, In such an ambitious undertaking, all these positives come together for a very, very good listen.

The narrator is solid, but I want more from Rodska in the second novel, to step up his game, if you will. He can add much more to an already good effort, and I'm expecting improvement the next time around.

If you read my reviews, you'll note that I do NOT give spoilers or plot lines - There are countless other reviewers that will do that for you. This is a fantastic meal that doesn't need anyone to throw leftovers at you to get your attention.

This meal has been well-prepared and the presentation is excellent.

Please step up - Your meal is prepared. Your table awaits.

Bon Appétit!

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Best debut novel in many years!

Do not miss out on this book! It is a fantasy book about believable people, idealism warring with necessities. The magical system is fresh and inventive. And to top it off you get to laugh out loud now and then. One of the best books (if not the best) I have listened to.

Christian Rodska is awesome as a narrator. He is one of the best!

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great book

I appologize in advance for not leaving a more detailed review. I appreciate the more thorough reviewers when i try to decide to buy a book, but thats not what you're going to get here.

Bottom line, it's a great read and I was downloading the sequel as soon as the narrator said the word Epilogue.

The main advice I have is not to let the civil war/gunpowder era setting discourage you like it did me. I had to remember how much I loved Sandersons Alloy of Law etc to realize that i could appreciate a somewhat more modernized application of a magic system if it is done well. And this story certainly delivers.

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Just couldn't get past the narration

I've never read Brian McClellan previously and purchased this on a friend's suggestion. They obviously read the paper version so were able to get into the story. I on the other hand grabbed the audio version and after suffering a mere 5 chapters had to quit.

The narrator, while eloquent, was a one trick pony that only had one character trait - "crotchety old man"

Every character sounded to similar and equally angry to the point of not giving me a chance to get attached to any of them.

Given time I may give McClellan a second chance and buy the physical book but for now I'll pass.

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