History, Magic, Teens, & Not An Inkling of Romance

First of all, Thirteenth Child's lack of romance is extremely refreshing. There are a lot of YA series out there with strong female leads, and there's almost always a romance in there... but not here. Maybe in the later books.

Eff isn't unique in her tomboy-ish characteristics; that's a familiar trope in modern YA literature, but she's more Laura Ingalls or Jo March than Katniss Everdeen. She's remarkably normal for a world full of magic - then again, this is a world where magic is seen as a given, and its the Revisionists (affirmed non-magic users) are seen as radical.

Wrede writes a world that makes no bones about life with magic being easier, and finds suitable, unexpected consequences for that magic. Magic in Columbia isn't opposite of nature, it's an instrinic part of it - and as our environment adapts and changes with our use of it, so the magic does in Eff's world.

Amanda Ronconi is a fine narrator, and I liked what she did with Eff's character and did adore the voices she chose for the men - particularly Wash, a character who appears about 2/3 of the way through the book. I don't know if it was a specific choice on her part, but she made Eff and Lan's voice relatively similar (they're twins!) and I liked that. Otherwise, the narration was a little slow, but it suited the tone of the story.

Overall, the plot isn't particularly surprising or exciting, but it's a solid tale with good world creation, and fleshed-out characters. I was able to stop and start listening with relative ease... I think it took me about two weeks to go through it, listening for a few hours every couple of days. It was easy to fall back into the story, and Amanda Ronconi helped with that familiarity a lot.

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Steam Dragons!!

Missed it by that much.
Patricia invents an interesting alternate world, which supposedly has dire wolves, steam dragons, mammoths, wooly rhinos, sphinx, sabre cats and more. This universe has glimpses of Card's Seventh Son and Sanderson's The Rithmathist. The problem, as with a lot of teen books, is the writing style. The writing is similar to a little kid writing a letter. Hi, I am fine, how are you? The book supposedly has all the animals mentioned above, but with the exception of a run in with a mammoth and a dead steam dragon, we just hear they exist, they take no part in the story. Lots of the story is just tedious things, that could be going on in anybody's life.

What I did like.
This book is pro parents, school and teachers. The parents in this book, especially the mom are the best part. The mom is extremely level headed (unless you think she should quit having children.) The teachers are positive and challenge the students. School is looked at as something important. I also listened to the whole book, which I often don't do with a book that is not five star material.

Amanda Ronconi
I didn't feel that Amanda was all in for this reading. At times she sounded rather drool. The first few chapters, it sounded like she was mad at somebody. At other times it sounded like she was enjoying her work. I especially liked her voice for the teacher. It reminded me of one of the regular women on NPR.

Teen books and or children books
I have a real problem with this category. It seems that if the writing is substandard and the main character is young, then it is automatically put in this category. Sanderson, Card and others have shown that you can write books aimed at a younger crowd and have them still be exciting, interesting reads, that even adults will like. An editor should have made PW go back and put more life into this book.

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Wild Magic in the Wild West

Any additional comments?

Eff is the twin sister of the seventh son of a seventh son. She is also a thirteenth born. In this alternate universe just after the War of Secession, birth order is an important factor in this world where magic and ordinary live in uncomfortable partnership. From her birth, members of the family point out everything bad as her fault and are waiting for her to turn evil. She begins to believe it. In contrast, her brother's exalted magical status makes him lucky and magical beyond belief.

When the twins are five years old, their father gets a job as a professor of a college on the western frontier. Their father, a professor of magic, is an exciting addition to this college. The twins and the other siblings grow up and flourish in this environment. Eff learns confidence, makes friends, and learns to think through the negative message about her birth order.

There are lots of adventures and explorations in this entertaining novel of a world and history not-quite-ours.

This was an audio book and the narrator did a wonderful job capturing the different accents, genders, and the character of Eff.

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If the "Little House on the Prairie" had magic.

Interesting concept. I liked it enough to finish listening to it and ended in a place that suggests a sequel. Nothing terribly new or exciting for the fantasy reader. Might be a fun story for the fans of "Ann of Green Gables" or "Sara, Plain and Tall"

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marvelous performance nice coming of age story

I would never have gotten this if it hadn't been on 3.99 special. This IS a YA story but its a good one, so it works for me. I think the Laura Ingalls meets Harry Potter tag is apt as far as it goes - but in this one Magic isn't a secret world - its a mainstream political issue. I am interested in seeing how the sort of "amish" no magic fringe plays out. Its always good to investigate ways of resisting.

Its a slow but engaging start - the pov girl is only 5 when the story opens but she hears things, and shes 13 or so by the middle.

I usually avoid female narrators. Not always, mind- there are several that I really like - its a tone/ pitch thing I think- but this performance is great. There are subtleties of accent and pitch that are mindblowing and shes never ever squeaky.

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Little House on the Prairie meets Harry Potter

Wow, I really enjoyed the first book of this series. As I understand it, imagine the 1800's and the Wild West mixed in with wild unbelievable creatures (including mammoths!) and magic as part of the everyday lives of these pioneers. The author does a great job at the world creation of this alternative reality, and though the descriptive aspect of the series might turn off some readers, it's well balanced with good character development and some adventure. The reader, Amanda Ronconi, is a favorite of mine from the Molly Harper books, but she does a great job reading for this new series. It could use a little bit of romance, though there's a hint of something in the air, but I guess I'll need to read the rest of the books to find out if my feelings are correct. I really look forward to the rest of the series.

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Great story-total surprise- next one please

Great series start. I was pleasantly wowed by this unknown author, as we follow Eff, the "unlucky" thirteenth child as she grows into her magical own. What I loved: book translated to adults. No formula love triangle. Female heroine. Good adventure. Good storytelling...and great narrator. The bad: Could have had some more complex characters. Overall, a great, light adventure tale that I really enjoyed- hope they release the next two soon!

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Refreshingly un-teen angsty

Let me start by saying I liked this book enough to read all of them in just a few days.

The book had been in my wish list for quite some time, and I just kept ignoring it fearing it was another teen romance just set in a new place (which it is not). I finally gave it a listen because of the narrator she is one of my favorites. There are a few that I am willing to try any book they have read Amanda Ronconi, Renée Raudman, Lorelei King, Cynthia Holloway, and Marguerite Gavin. I am happy I did.

This book has been compared with the Harry Potter series. I do not really get that (except for the magic). Rowlings is absolutely brilliant, and gives rich twisting details to her plot and characters, but the kid going to wizzarding school has been done before (not as well mind you). Wrede's story felt different to me. I am not sure I have read a book like it before.

The story follows Eff (don't let the name bother you like it did me it is a nickname). She is born the thirteenth child of a seventh son. She also has a twin that is the 7th son of the 7th son (which we have seen before). She is told for most of her young life that being the 13th is a bad thing. Through out the story the idea of the thirteenth child is explored, and through it Eff grows and starts to find out who she no matter what order she was born in.

I like the family dynamics in this book. It gave the story more depth. They were not all lovey dovey all of the time but they did love each other. From the twin who was the favorite whether he wanted to be or not, to the older bossy sister they enriched the story. I adored the parents. It was nice to have kind loving caring parents rather than the mean, indifferent, quirky, uncaring, or too busy parents that have been in a lot of the books I have read recently. This probably where the Laura Anne Wilder comparisons come in (that and the west themed)

I love a good western, and this was. Yes there was magic but you still had the horses and a lot of the other stuff that goes into westerns. What made it interesting is the idea that the town is along the Mammoth (Mississippi) River and that on the other side of it is all of these creatures from dragons to mammoths to wooly rihnasorous to bison. If you simply cross the river where the magic wall is you are taking your life into your own hands.

It was nice not to have a romance instead Wrede concentrated on Eff finding out who she is. I highly recommend this series

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Really weak story and writing

What could have made this a 4 or 5-star listening experience for you?

The characters were flat and this felt more like a first draft outline than a finalized story. About 10 more drafts would have made this a good story. Really very little happened to the characters that made me root for them.

Has Thirteenth Child turned you off from other books in this genre?

Nope... but I won't be listening to anything by this author.

How did the narrator detract from the book?

Narrator was ok, but not one of the better speakers. Her attempt at character voices were half-hearted at best.

You didn’t love this book... but did it have any redeeming qualities?

The concept of a 13th born child witch was a great idea and could have really been a great story. It was the reason I bought the book

Any additional comments?

I really tried with this story. I plowed through it thinking that the story telling had to get better. the trails of a child must get deeper as she grew up... but by the end of the book I felt like I was cheated out of 10 hours of my life.

So many missed story opportunities were glossed over and the major trials that would shape a young girl were, again, glossed over. The writing and story telling were the weakest I have heard. Something you would expect from freshman English... not something that Audible would have in their collection.

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repetitive

What could have made this a 4 or 5-star listening experience for you?

I get it that this is a YA book. I finished it, but teens deserve a well-crafted story. This would have been better if the author explained the different types of magic early on in the book. Alternative history is interesting, but the story didn't captivate.

What was most disappointing about Patricia C. Wrede’s story?

Eff is a self-pitying sad sack who lets others around her control her destiny. If i heard the phrases "13th child" or "7th son of 7th son" ONE more time i think i would have screamed.

Would you listen to another book narrated by Amanda Ronconi?

I bought this because of Amanda! I absolutely love her in Molly Harper's books.

What reaction did this book spark in you? Anger, sadness, disappointment?

disappointed.

Any additional comments?

Try Joseph Delaney's series The Last Apprentice instead.

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